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My Heart

January 17, 2013

My heart
shattered
so many times
on so many pieces
it was impossible
to find them
so instead
waisting time
trying to find
and put it back
in one
I go on
and now
there are
so many pieces
of my heart
blown by the wind
all over the world
I don’t mind
I have
one little piece
of my heart
left for myself

by oneanna65

P.S. You know, I’m not a Poet. My Angels are back. And one of them made me write this……. :) ……..

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70 Comments
  1. that is absolutely beautiful…………..

  2. I love where this went. Great post.

  3. one word: beautiful!

  4. Stunning

  5. I look forward to more angel prodded poetry! ;) Lovely!

    Blessings ~ Wendy

  6. We continue because there is beauty. You have amazing angels…

  7. beautiful words my dear, so beautiful…we should all remember to just keep a bit of our hearts for ourselves…

  8. Its a nice piece dear

  9. Love this, I do believe you are a poet. This was beautiful, anything that inspire us and come from our hearts always it’s poetry! Thanks for the reminder that no matter how many times our heart is broken and in how many pieces is left, WE always stay with one, important piece in our own hands! Namaste ♥

  10. Beautiful and inspirational post – thank you.

  11. The more you share the more you have. You have great heart and it is enough for everyone and yourself either. Have a nice day!

  12. Eloquently written!

  13. i love you so much and am so sorry that i’ve not been online much this year. one more week and i’ll be catching up. this is beautiful, and i look forward to applauding your new year. hug those angels!
    lisa/z

  14. Beautiful!

  15. This was lovely – I thought it was really clever the way the set up of the poem seems to represent how many pieces of your heart have been scattered, so many, a feeling of being disjointed, but then at the end we come back to you and peace!

  16. i like the way you said it… it’s really nice :)

  17. Wonderful…

  18. Hang on to that piece.

  19. Beautiful post! :)

  20. Wonderful, wonderful. Would that we would all so easily share all the small pieces of our hearts… Blessings & be well~

  21. Thankyou for sharing this heart felt poem on my Birthday. Take care.

  22. lovely……. simply wonderful…………….

  23. Brilliant poem! Blessings for you and thanks for liking my sauerkraut in a jar post.

  24. Wonderful- very beautiful!

  25. Sublime and so very positive <3

  26. Methinks there is poetry woven into your soul, Anna ;)…take care…:) x

  27. Write as your muse dictates. On a similar theme, 25 years ago, I constructed a poem about fragmentation, using a map that included all of the places that I had lived and traveled to which I found an attachment. For me, rather than the wind scattering the pieces of the map, I had left periods of my past at each of those locations.
    Oscar

  28. The thing is, a piece of heart on its own can’t possibly do too well, don’t we need all the pieces for the right pressure? Oh wait, maybe it regenerates like the tail of a lizard, that must be it. I’m just making this up as I go (and not making fun of it because I like the poem very much). I feel that way too. I lived on three continents and in five countries and I’ve unwittingly left pieces of myself everywhere and feel that I am running on one cylinder. I’ll start engaging that lizard. :)

  29. Chancy and Mumsy (Mag) permalink

    Very nice!! Hugs

  30. Lovely. I believe everyone has a little poetry deep inside them. Thank you for liking my page.

  31. Simply beautiful!

  32. It’s beautiful.. so beauiful !

  33. This one speaks…to the Heart. Love it!

  34. Great to see you today visiting one of my Angels.

  35. cristinasandru permalink

    This poem is absolutely gorgeous! The words aren’t enough to describe the soul that lives in this poetry, is amazing, thank you for sharing! Have a blessed day! Best wishes from Romania

  36. cristinasandru permalink

    I have nominated you to the The Very inspiring Blogger award! check it out here: http://cristinasandru.wordpress.com/2013/01/21/i-am-honored-because-i-have-been-nominated-by-httprollinwithcarro-wordpress-com-for-the-very-inspiring-blogger-award-thank-you-very-much/
    You really deserve this Award! Wishing you the best!
    Cristina Sandru from Romania

  37. Maybe you are not a Poet but you are very good trasmiting feelings. Please continue doing doing.

    P.S.: Thank you very much for visiting my blog.

  38. Really nice, Anna

  39. You are a Poet, now, dear, dear Anna… >Jay

  40. Hi oneanna65. I’m glad you liked my poem ‘The Policeman’. Please Take Care. The Foureyed Poet.

  41. I’d say wherever this comes from it’s lovely. You are a poet I think. Thank you for posting this piece of art and for visiting and commenting on my site. All the best to you always, dear,
    Steve

  42. !!!!!!!!! incredible!!!!!!!

  43. What a beautiful blog! Thanks for stopping by mine so I could find you ;-) I’m totally into your Angels too … a great source of strength!

  44. petit4chocolatier permalink

    This is beautiful. I love it :)

  45. Reblogged this on bearspawprint and commented:
    Good thing you had an extra large heart to begin with……

  46. raphaelcha permalink

    Great place, thank you for stopping by.

  47. I really enjoyed reading this, wonderful..

  48. Hiya, beautiful poem. Maybe it was those lost pieces that made the remaining one very beautiful :) Also, thanks for liking one of my posts.

  49. A2LSM permalink

    I love what you said about “You know, I’m not a Poet. My Angels are back. And one of them made me write this!” I’m not a poet either but sometimes i find when I’m in a “raw” moment or feeling deeply a poem pouts out… Keep letting your Angels write poems through you!!! They are great. And thank you for stopping by my blog :-)

  50. Anna this is beautiful! I thank the Lord for you and what you share. Take care and thank you for the like on my blog.

  51. Stunning!
    And thank you for liking my blog.

  52. Thank you for stopping by, Miss Anna. Your writing is lovely. Elaine writes at a few sites I frequent and I bet you two would enjoy each other. She is a cancer survivor and blogs about that mixed with Jesus. :)

  53. i just loved it and I..i am speechless. do not know wht to write I just salute You

  54. Simple, striking, emotional…just lovely!

  55. This is just so beautiful!

  56. this one is really beautiful, i like it loads. beautiful finish

  57. Reblogged this on lightinsmiles and commented:
    A beautiful perception of looking at life with such beauty !

  58. Beautifully expressed…

  59. This is a better poem than some “real” poets have written. Keep up the good work.

  60. Thanks- I just read it again- more beautiful this time!

  61. sociable7 permalink

    Amazing, :)

  62. Thanks for following my post. I enjoyed reading yours and… happy birthday!

  63. well done to the angel then… ;) I loved this! Your right sometimes its not possible to fix all the pieces and I suppose that’s ok

  64. I admire your courage. The rest of the world is very lucky to have the pieces of your heart that you have shared.

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